Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pals-mc-pon-04

Request Review of draft-ietf-pals-mc-pon
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-09-06
Requested 2016-08-23
Draft last updated 2016-09-05
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -04 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -04 by Steve Hanna (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -04 by Geoff Huston (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Roni Even
State Completed
Review review-ietf-pals-mc-pon-04-genart-lc-even-2016-09-05
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 05)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2016-09-05


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Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2016–9-5

IETF LC End Date: 2016–9-7

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Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC.



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