Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pals-seamless-vccv-02
review-ietf-pals-seamless-vccv-02-genart-lc-dupont-2016-04-01-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-pals-seamless-vccv
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2016-04-05
Requested 2016-03-24
Authors Vengada Govindan, Carlos Pignataro
Draft last updated 2016-04-01
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -02 by Francis Dupont (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -02 by Phillip Hallam-Baker (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Francis Dupont
State Completed
Review review-ietf-pals-seamless-vccv-02-genart-lc-dupont-2016-04-01
Reviewed rev. 02 (document currently at 03)
Review result Ready
Review completed: 2016-04-01

Review
review-ietf-pals-seamless-vccv-02-genart-lc-dupont-2016-04-01

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Document: draft-ietf-pals-seamless-vccv-02.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20160331
IETF LC End Date: 20160405
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 - in ToC page 2 and 2.1 page 4: capabilites -> Capabilities

 - in ToC page 2 and 6 page 9: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments

 - 2.2.2 page 5 (twice): signalling -> signaling

 - in 2.3 page 6: I am not sure (*) the "encased" term is common English
  (*) but I am not a native English speaker too... I suggest to ask
  someone from Asia for instance. Or simply leave this to the RFC Editor?

Regards

Francis.Dupont at fdupont.fr

PS: already sent to id.all at ietf.org