Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pals-vpls-pim-snooping-05
review-ietf-pals-vpls-pim-snooping-05-opsdir-lc-pignataro-2017-05-10-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-pals-vpls-pim-snooping
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 06)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2017-05-19
Requested 2017-05-05
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Review State Completed
Reviewer Carlos Pignataro
Review review-ietf-pals-vpls-pim-snooping-05-opsdir-lc-pignataro-2017-05-10
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/_x-jXTi8O9ARPbhw5rPQWMjBqTE
Reviewed rev. 05 (document currently at 06)
Review result Has Nits
Draft last updated 2017-05-10
Review closed: 2017-05-10

Review
review-ietf-pals-vpls-pim-snooping-05-opsdir-lc-pignataro-2017-05-10

This is a well written, and comprehensive document.

Only a couple of nits, for the authors consideration:

* In some places, the text uses "Pim" instead of "PIM"
* The Appendices are a bit abruptly integrated. A better description of what Appendix A is, maybe even a more descriptive title, and the normative-level of the Appendices would help (even for an Informational document.)

Thanks,

-- Carlos.