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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pana-statemachine-

Request Review of draft-ietf-pana-statemachine
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2009-04-21
Requested 2009-04-09
Authors Rafael Marin-Lopez , Victor Fajardo , Yoshihiro Ohba
I-D last updated 2009-04-24
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Radia Perlman
Assignment Reviewer Radia Perlman
State Completed Snapshot
Review review-ietf-pana-statemachine-secdir-lc-perlman-2009-04-24
Completed 2009-04-24
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's 

ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. 

These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security 

area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these 

comments just like any other last call comments.

This document writes out the state machines for all the pana functions. 

I did not scrutinize them all to see if they were accurate,

though I did look at a few of them and those were cleanly described and 

well thought out.

It's a bit weird for a document associated with a security protocol to 

have such a short security

considerations section:

"  This document's intent is to describe the PANA state machines fully.
  To this end, any security concerns with this document are likely a
  reflection of security concerns with PANA itself."

But really they are correct -- that the security considerations are for
the PANA protocol itself.

So I see no problems with this document.