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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-howto-09
review-ietf-payload-rtp-howto-09-genart-lc-housley-2013-11-28-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-howto
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 14)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-12-06
Requested 2013-11-25
Authors Magnus Westerlund
I-D last updated 2013-11-28
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -09 by Russ Housley (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -10 by Russ Housley (diff)
Secdir Early review of -09 by Alexey Melnikov (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -09 by Bert Wijnen (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Russ Housley
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-payload-rtp-howto by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 09 (document currently at 14)
Result Almost ready
Completed 2013-11-28
review-ietf-payload-rtp-howto-09-genart-lc-housley-2013-11-28-00
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Document: draft-ietf-payload-rtp-howto-09.txt
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2013-11-27
IETF LC End Date: 2013-12-06
IESG Telechat date: Unknown

Summary:  The document is almost ready for publication as a
informational RFC.  I raise minor concerns that should be resolved
before IESG evaluation.

Minor Concerns:  

In section 3.2.1, the document references RFC 6722.  I think it would
be better to reference the Tao web page.

In section 4.1.1, I would reword the last sentence.  I suggest: "The
authors also do one last review of the document immediately prior to
its publication as an RFC to ensure that no errors or formatting
problems have been introduced during the publication process."

This document references a bunch of I-Ds.  Since all of the references
are informative, it would be helpful to know if this document ought to
proceed to publication or whether it should wait until these I-Ds are
published as RFCs.