Last Call Review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegxs-12
review-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegxs-12-genart-lc-housley-2021-05-06-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegxs
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 18)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2021-05-17
Requested 2021-05-03
Authors Sébastien Lugan , Antonin Descampe , Corentin Damman , Thomas Richter , Tim Bruylants
I-D last updated 2021-05-06
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -12 by Russ Housley (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Russ Housley
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegxs by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/a1cD1Jv5Swi1fv9mrgnH72sJDGQ
Reviewed revision 12 (document currently at 18)
Result Almost ready
Completed 2021-05-06
review-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegxs-12-genart-lc-housley-2021-05-06-00
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Document: draft-ietf-payload-rtp-jpegxs-12
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2021-05-06
IETF LC End Date: 2021-05-17
IESG Telechat date: Unknown


Summary: Almost Ready


Major Concerns:

Section 7.2.1:  Does the SHALL related to [SMPTE-ST2110-10] only apply
when TP=2110TPNL or TP=2110TPW?  Please reword to be clear when this
SHALL statement applies.


Minor Concerns:

Section 3.3:  I do not have [ISO21122-2], and obviously an implementer
will need that document.  Can a bit more be said about "the profile"
and "the level and sublevel used" without making this document too
big?  I am able to get a feel for the other things listed here from
their names.

Section 3.4:  Can you please provide some explanation of the "frat
field"?


Nits:

Section 3.2:  I do not understand the the last sentence?  Is it the
same as: It represents sample values of a single image, without any
interpretation relative to a colour space.

Section 5: s/of ST 2110-21 do not /of [SMPTE-ST2110-21] do not /