Last Call Review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-vc2hq-05
review-ietf-payload-rtp-vc2hq-05-genart-lc-davies-2018-05-04-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-payload-rtp-vc2hq
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Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-05-16
Requested 2018-05-02
Other Reviews Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Joseph Salowey (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Elwyn Davies
Review review-ietf-payload-rtp-vc2hq-05-genart-lc-davies-2018-05-04
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Reviewed rev. 05 (document currently at 06)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2018-05-04
Review completed: 2018-05-04

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review-ietf-payload-rtp-vc2hq-05-genart-lc-davies-2018-05-04

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Document: draft-ietf-payload-rtp-vc2hq-05
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2018-05-04
IETF LC End Date: 2018-05-16
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready.  A well written and comprehensible document.  Thanks!  I spotted a few minor nits noted below.

Major issues:\
None

Minor issues:
None

Nits/editorial comments: 
Abstract, S1 and VC2 reference: Expand SMPTE (Soc of Motion Picture and Television Engineers).

s4, para 3:  This para would probably be more helpful as a set of six bulleted entries for the six different packet formats, and omitting the 'one which carries' from each.

s4.1, Sequecnce Number: s/extneded/extended/

ss4.1, 4.2: The encoding and bit ordering of the numeric fields should be specified (presumably this can be covered by a single statement that they are all unsigned integers encoded in Network Byte Order.).

s4.4, third bullet: s/Hight/High/

s6.1, last para: Presumably this is left over from the template and should be removed.

s8, para 1: s/This responsibility lays on anyone/This responsibility lies with anyone/