Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pce-association-group-09
review-ietf-pce-association-group-09-genart-lc-shirazipour-2019-06-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-pce-association-group
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-06-06
Requested 2019-05-23
Draft last updated 2019-06-13
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -08 by Stig Venaas (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Derek Atkins (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -09 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Review review-ietf-pce-association-group-09-genart-lc-shirazipour-2019-06-13
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/xdPptBvcEN-PdxhycuIiKxs6STw
Reviewed rev. 09 (document currently at 10)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2019-06-13

Review
review-ietf-pce-association-group-09-genart-lc-shirazipour-2019-06-13

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

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Document: draft-ietf-pce-association-group-09

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2019-06-05
IETF LC End Date: 2019-06-06
IESG Telechat date: NA


Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have a comment .
Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
It could help to clarify if this proposal brings any new requirements on existing LSP OAM/path protection techniques, or brings the need for extensions.


Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson Research
www.ericsson.com