Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pce-inter-area-as-applicability-07
review-ietf-pce-inter-area-as-applicability-07-secdir-lc-farrell-2019-05-29-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-pce-inter-area-as-applicability
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 08)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2019-05-30
Requested 2019-05-16
Authors Daniel King, Haomian Zheng
Draft last updated 2019-05-29
Completed reviews Rtgdir Last Call review of -07 by Mach Chen (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Stephen Farrell (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Stephen Farrell
State Completed
Review review-ietf-pce-inter-area-as-applicability-07-secdir-lc-farrell-2019-05-29
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/quVGSvnDSqtRBZTERbnYk8XxTZ4
Reviewed rev. 07 (document currently at 08)
Review result Has Nits
Review completed: 2019-05-29

Review
review-ietf-pce-inter-area-as-applicability-07-secdir-lc-farrell-2019-05-29

I'm not sure if this is a nit or not:

The draft describes uses of PCE involving multiple domains.  But the "domain"
concept in this case seems to encompass both/either different administrative 
domains and/or different technology domains within a single administrative
boundary. If it's realistic, wouldn't it be good give recommendations as to what
to do at least when administrative boundaries are being crossed? (E.g. "use
TLS" in that case.)

Other than that the draft appears ready to me.