Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pce-pcep-color-11
review-ietf-pce-pcep-color-11-genart-lc-holmberg-2025-02-18-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-pce-pcep-color |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 12) | |
| Type | IETF Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2025-02-07 | |
| Requested | 2025-01-24 | |
| Authors | Balaji Rajagopalan , Vishnu Pavan Beeram , Shaofu Peng , Mike Koldychev , Gyan Mishra | |
| I-D last updated | 2025-04-22 (Latest revision 2025-02-26) | |
| Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Early review of -04
by Ron Bonica
(diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -11 by Christer Holmberg (diff) Tsvart IETF Last Call review of -08 by David L. Black (diff) Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -11 by Adrian Farrel (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Christer Holmberg |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-pce-pcep-color by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/tf2sz7eezuBFyzYhW9izEQW2FzQ | |
| Reviewed revision | 11 (document currently at 12) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2025-02-18 |
review-ietf-pce-pcep-color-11-genart-lc-holmberg-2025-02-18-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-pce-pcep-color-11 Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review Date: 2025-02-18 IETF LC End Date: 2025-02-07 IESG Telechat date: 2025-02-20 Summary: The document is well written, and easy to understand. However, I do have an editorial comment that I would like the authors to address. Major issues: N/A Minor issues: N/A Nits/editorial comments: Currently the text says that a color tag can be used to associate a route or policy with an intent or objective. For readers not familiar it is a little unclear what "intent or objective" refers to. Perhaps adding a few words that it can be used to include/exclude certain type of traffic on a route, etc.