Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pce-vendor-constraints-11
review-ietf-pce-vendor-constraints-11-opsdir-lc-hares-2013-12-19-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-pce-vendor-constraints |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 11) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2013-12-17 | |
| Requested | 2013-11-28 | |
| Authors | Fatai Zhang , Adrian Farrel | |
| Draft last updated | 2013-12-19 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -11
by
Robert Sparks
Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Warren "Ace" Kumari Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Susan Hares |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Susan Hares |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-pce-vendor-constraints-11-opsdir-lc-hares-2013-12-19
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| Reviewed revision | 11 | |
| Result | Has Nits | |
| Completed | 2013-12-19 |
review-ietf-pce-vendor-constraints-11-opsdir-lc-hares-2013-12-19-00
Fatai, Adrian and ops-dir: This is an ops-directorate review. Status of the document: Ready Reviewer: Susan Hares Editorial : Comments. Well written. IANA section: Good for IANA definitions Technical query: - Where are the following constants defined: - GC - XRO - LSPA - BANDWIDTH - RRO - IRO - LOAD-BALANCING This text provides valid syntax definition. However, I do not know if you wish to have text that spells out the abbreviations within this text. This is a technical query where definitions are as a question: Management considerations : Good This document considers configuration and operational policy, information & data models; Liveness detection and monitoring, validation of correct operations. It provides instructions on interactions with other PCE functions, and a good summary of the impact. Security: Good warnings on use. Sue Hares shares at ndzh.com