Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pce-vendor-constraints-11
review-ietf-pce-vendor-constraints-11-opsdir-lc-hares-2013-12-19-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-pce-vendor-constraints
Requested rev. no specific revision
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2013-12-17
Requested 2013-11-28
Other Reviews Genart Last Call review of -11 by Robert Sparks
Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Warren Kumari
Review State Completed
Reviewer Susan Hares
Review review-ietf-pce-vendor-constraints-11-opsdir-lc-hares-2013-12-19
Posted at http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/ops-dir/current/msg00068.html
Reviewed rev. 11
Review result Has Nits
Draft last updated 2013-12-19
Review completed: 2013-12-19

Review
review-ietf-pce-vendor-constraints-11-opsdir-lc-hares-2013-12-19

 

Fatai, Adrian and ops-dir: 

 

This is an ops-directorate review.  

 

Status of the document: Ready

Reviewer: Susan Hares 

Editorial

: Comments. Well written. 

IANA section: Good for IANA definitions 

Technical query: 

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Where are the following constants defined: 

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GC

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XRO 

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LSPA

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BANDWIDTH

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RRO

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IRO

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LOAD-BALANCING

 

This text provides valid syntax definition.  However, I do not know if you wish to have text that spells out the abbreviations within this text. 

 

This is a technical query where definitions are as a question: 

 

Management considerations

: Good 

 

This document considers configuration and operational policy, information & data models;  Liveness detection and monitoring, validation of correct operations.  It provides instructions on interactions with other PCE functions, and a good summary of the impact. 

 

Security: Good warnings on use. 

 

Sue Hares

shares at ndzh.com