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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pce-vendor-constraints-11
review-ietf-pce-vendor-constraints-11-opsdir-lc-hares-2013-12-19-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-pce-vendor-constraints
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2013-12-17
Requested 2013-11-28
Authors Fatai Zhang , Adrian Farrel
Draft last updated 2013-12-19
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -11 by Robert Sparks
Secdir Last Call review of -11 by Warren "Ace" Kumari
Opsdir Last Call review of -11 by Susan Hares
Assignment Reviewer Susan Hares
State Completed
Review review-ietf-pce-vendor-constraints-11-opsdir-lc-hares-2013-12-19
Reviewed revision 11
Result Has Nits
Completed 2013-12-19
review-ietf-pce-vendor-constraints-11-opsdir-lc-hares-2013-12-19-00

Fatai, Adrian and ops-dir:



This is an ops-directorate review.



Status of the document: Ready

Reviewer: Susan Hares

Editorial

: Comments. Well written.

IANA section: Good for IANA definitions

Technical query:

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Where are the following constants defined:

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GC

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XRO

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LSPA

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BANDWIDTH

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RRO

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IRO

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LOAD-BALANCING



This text provides valid syntax definition.  However, I do not know if you wish
to have text that spells out the abbreviations within this text.



This is a technical query where definitions are as a question:



Management considerations

: Good



This document considers configuration and operational policy, information &
data models;  Liveness detection and monitoring, validation of correct
operations.  It provides instructions on interactions with other PCE functions,
and a good summary of the impact.



Security: Good warnings on use.



Sue Hares

shares at ndzh.com