Telechat Review of draft-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext-11
review-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext-11-genart-telechat-davies-2019-01-28-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 17) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2019-02-05 | |
| Requested | 2019-01-21 | |
| Authors | Young Lee , Ramon Casellas | |
| Draft last updated | 2019-01-28 | |
| Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Last Call review of -08
by
Ravi Singh
(diff)
Genart Last Call review of -10 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Watson Ladd (diff) Genart Telechat review of -11 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff) |
|
| Assignment | Reviewer | Elwyn B. Davies |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext-11-genart-telechat-davies-2019-01-28
|
|
| Reviewed revision | 11 (document currently at 17) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2019-01-28 |
review-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext-11-genart-telechat-davies-2019-01-28-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext-117 Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review Date: 2019-01-28 IETF LC End Date: 2018-12-27 IESG Telechat date: 2019-02-07 Summary: Ready. There are a couple of trivial nits remaining. Otherwise, thanks very much for addressing my last call comments. Major issues: None. Minor issues: None. Nits/editorial comments: S3: The expansion of 3R needs to be at first occurrence. This is one paragraph earlier than the added expansion in v11. S3, next to last para: need to expand FEC. S4.1, para 5: s/to the allocation/used for the allocation/