Telechat Review of draft-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext-11
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Request Review of draft-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2019-02-05
Requested 2019-01-21
Authors Young Lee , Ramon Casellas
I-D last updated 2020-07-21 (Latest revision 2019-03-01)
Completed reviews Rtgdir IETF Last Call review of -08 by Ravi Singh (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -10 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -10 by Watson Ladd (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Elwyn B. Davies (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Elwyn B. Davies
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 17)
Result Ready
Completed 2019-01-28
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Document: draft-ietf-pce-wson-rwa-ext-117
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2019-01-28
IETF LC End Date: 2018-12-27
IESG Telechat date: 2019-02-07

Summary:
Ready.  There are a couple of trivial nits remaining. Otherwise, thanks very
much for addressing my last call comments.

Major issues:
None.

Minor issues:
None.

Nits/editorial comments:
S3: The expansion of 3R needs to be at first occurrence. This is one paragraph
earlier than the added expansion in v11.

S3, next to last para: need to expand FEC.

S4.1, para 5: s/to the allocation/used for the allocation/