Telechat Review of draft-ietf-pcp-description-option-04
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Request Review of draft-ietf-pcp-description-option
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 05)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-02-18
Requested 2014-02-06
Other Reviews Genart Last Call review of -03 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir Early review of -02 by Phillip Hallam-Baker (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -04 by Phillip Hallam-Baker (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Jouni Korhonen (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Roni Even
Review review-ietf-pcp-description-option-04-genart-telechat-even-2014-03-22
Posted at http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg09643.html
Reviewed rev. 04 (document currently at 05)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2014-03-22
Review completed: 2014-03-22

Review
review-ietf-pcp-description-option-04-genart-telechat-even-2014-03-22

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Document:  

draft-ietf-pcp-description-option-03

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2014–1-26

IETF LC End Date: 2014–2-4

IESG Telechat date: 

 

Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a standard track RFC

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Major issues:

 

Minor issues:

 

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I am not sure what the use of the “description” option is. I can see how to create one but as for usage the only text I can see is “

Querying the PCP server to get the description text of an existing mapping is out of scope.” I think that the document should provide information about the purpose of this option.

 

Nits/editorial comments:

The IANA section should provide enough information to fill the registry 

http://www.iana.org/assignments/pcp-parameters/pcp-parameters.xml#options