Telechat Review of draft-ietf-pcp-description-option-04
review-ietf-pcp-description-option-04-genart-telechat-even-2014-03-22-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-pcp-description-option |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 05) | |
Type | Telechat Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2014-02-18 | |
Requested | 2014-02-06 | |
Authors | Mohamed Boucadair , Reinaldo Penno , Dan Wing | |
I-D last updated | 2014-03-22 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -03 by Roni Even
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Genart Telechat review of -04 by Roni Even (diff) Secdir Early review of -02 by Phillip Hallam-Baker (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -04 by Phillip Hallam-Baker (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -03 by Jouni Korhonen (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Roni Even |
State | Completed | |
Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-pcp-description-option by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 04 (document currently at 05) | |
Result | Ready | |
Completed | 2014-03-22 |
review-ietf-pcp-description-option-04-genart-telechat-even-2014-03-22-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-pcp-description-option-03 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2014–1-26 IETF LC End Date: 2014–2-4 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a standard track RFC . Major issues: Minor issues: 1. I am not sure what the use of the “description” option is. I can see how to create one but as for usage the only text I can see is “ Querying the PCP server to get the description text of an existing mapping is out of scope.” I think that the document should provide information about the purpose of this option. Nits/editorial comments: The IANA section should provide enough information to fill the registry http://www.iana.org/assignments/pcp-parameters/pcp-parameters.xml#options