Telechat Review of draft-ietf-pim-3810bis-11
review-ietf-pim-3810bis-11-intdir-telechat-jiang-2024-08-03-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-pim-3810bis |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 12) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | Internet Area Directorate (intdir) | |
| Deadline | 2024-08-02 | |
| Requested | 2024-07-10 | |
| Requested by | Éric Vyncke | |
| Authors | Brian Haberman | |
| I-D last updated | 2024-08-03 | |
| Completed reviews |
Rtgdir Last Call review of -10
by Mohamed Boucadair
(diff)
Genart Last Call review of -10 by Russ Housley (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Valery Smyslov (diff) Intdir Telechat review of -11 by Sheng Jiang (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Sheng Jiang |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-pim-3810bis by Internet Area Directorate Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/int-dir/tsyI9iHBhROALxfPrPngfUv4sgQ | |
| Reviewed revision | 11 (document currently at 12) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2024-08-03 |
review-ietf-pim-3810bis-11-intdir-telechat-jiang-2024-08-03-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the IntArea directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. Document: draft-ietf-pim-3810bis-11 Reviewer: Sheng Jiang Review Date: 2024-08-03 Result: Ready This Standards Track document updates RFC3810, "Multicast Listener Discovery Version 2 (MLDv2) for IPv6". This document added a few clarification texts, reformat tables and changed Reserved field in messages to Flags field, which depends on draft-ietf-pim-3228bis. It is Ready for publication after addressed comments of Last Call Reviews on -10 version. A small Nit, in section 7.6.2, last paragraph, FE80::/64 shall be low case.