Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pim-assert-packing-08
review-ietf-pim-assert-packing-08-genart-lc-robles-2023-03-02-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-pim-assert-packing
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2023-03-02
Requested 2023-02-16
Authors Yisong Liu , Toerless Eckert , Mike McBride , Zheng Zhang
I-D last updated 2023-03-02
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Ines Robles (diff)
Rtgdir Last Call review of -08 by Shuping Peng (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Robert Sparks (diff)
Tsvart Last Call review of -08 by Tommy Pauly (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ines Robles
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-pim-assert-packing by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/A065iqOzeSZgjxsN4BHq93CCi5M
Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 12)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2023-03-02
review-ietf-pim-assert-packing-08-genart-lc-robles-2023-03-02-00
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Document: draft-ietf-pim-assert-packing-08
Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review Date: 2023-03-02
IETF LC End Date: 2023-03-02
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

This document defines a mechanism to send and receive information for multiple
IP multicast flows in a single PackedAssert message.

I have not found major issues in this document.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

Missing caption for Figure 9 and Figure 10

Thanks for this document,

Ines.