Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pim-bfd-p2mp-use-case-08
review-ietf-pim-bfd-p2mp-use-case-08-genart-lc-shirazipour-2021-09-26-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-pim-bfd-p2mp-use-case
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2021-09-28
Requested 2021-09-14
Authors Greg Mirsky , Ji Xiaoli
I-D last updated 2022-01-26 (Latest revision 2021-12-09)
Completed reviews Rtgdir IETF Last Call review of -09 by Andy Smith (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -07 by Russ Housley (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -08 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-pim-bfd-p2mp-use-case by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
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Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 10)
Result Ready
Completed 2021-09-26
review-ietf-pim-bfd-p2mp-use-case-08-genart-lc-shirazipour-2021-09-26-00
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Document: draft-ietf-pim-bfd-p2mp-use-case-08

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2021-09-26
IETF LC End Date: 2021-09-28
IESG Telechat date: NA

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

Best Regards,
Meral Shirazipour
Ericsson
www.ericsson.com