Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pim-mofrr-tilfa-05
review-ietf-pim-mofrr-tilfa-05-genart-lc-shirazipour-2024-09-20-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-pim-mofrr-tilfa |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 07) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2024-09-23 | |
| Requested | 2024-09-09 | |
| Authors | Yisong Liu , Mike McBride , Zheng Zhang , Jingrong Xie , Changwang Lin | |
| I-D last updated | 2024-09-20 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -05
by Meral Shirazipour
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Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Valery Smyslov (diff) Rtgdir Last Call review of -05 by Susan Hares (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-pim-mofrr-tilfa by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/xgTr3S_7R0UZkC_HA7cVckuo_WE | |
| Reviewed revision | 05 (document currently at 07) | |
| Result | Almost ready | |
| Completed | 2024-09-20 |
review-ietf-pim-mofrr-tilfa-05-genart-lc-shirazipour-2024-09-20-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-pim-mofrr-tilfa-05 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2024-09-20 IETF LC End Date: 2024-09-23 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: This draft is almost ready to be published as Informational RFC, no other comments than those on the list. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: [Page 7], Figure, <-----Priamry Path, should be "Primary"