Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-12
review-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-12-secdir-lc-roca-2020-01-29-00

Review
review-ietf-pim-msdp-yang-12-secdir-lc-roca-2020-01-29

Hello,

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate’s ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

Summary: Ready with nits


The security considerations section is globally well writen and addresses
important topics. I don't have major comments.

Details:
- it is said that "(i.e., config true, which is the default)".
  I've searched in the YANG model and only found "config false" entries which seems to contradict what is said in section 5.

- Section 2.1 says: "This model can be used to configure and manage MSDP protocols." (with a final "s") which suggests there could be several MSDP protocols. I think it's a mistake.

Cheers,    Vincent