IETF Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pim-p2mp-policy-ping-11
review-ietf-pim-p2mp-policy-ping-11-genart-lc-shirazipour-2025-07-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-pim-p2mp-policy-ping
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 25)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2025-07-14
Requested 2025-06-30
Authors Hooman Bidgoli , Zafar Ali , Zhaohui (Jeffrey) Zhang , Anuj Budhiraja , Daniel Voyer
I-D last updated 2025-10-14 (Latest revision 2025-10-09)
Completed reviews Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -11 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -11 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Rtgdir IETF Last Call review of -14 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -16 by Wes Hardaker (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
State Completed
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Reviewed revision 11 (document currently at 25)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2025-07-13
review-ietf-pim-p2mp-policy-ping-11-genart-lc-shirazipour-2025-07-13-00
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Document: draft-ietf-pim-p2mp-policy-ping-11
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2025-07-13
IETF LC End Date: 2025-07-14
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
Asbtract: 
SR Point-to-Multipoint (P2MP) -suggestion->Segment Routing Point-to-Multipoint (SR P2MP) 
"via YANG modles"-->"via YANG models"

3.1.1. "Applicablitiry"-->"Applicability"
4. "Fu, thermore,"-->"Furthermore, "
8. draft-ietf-pim-sr-p2mp-policy latest is dated July 2025 not Oct 2019