Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pim-rfc8736bis-01
review-ietf-pim-rfc8736bis-01-rtgdir-lc-qu-2023-05-10-00

Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The
Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as
they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special
request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs.
For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see
https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/rtg/RtgDir Although these comments are primarily
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along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to
resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-pim-rfc8736bis-01 - PIM Message Type Space Extension and
Reserved Bits Reviewer: Yingzhen Qu Review Date: 2023/05/10 IETF LC End Date:
unknown Intended Status: Standards Track

Summary:
•       No issues found. This document is clearly written and ready for
publication.

Nits:
Section 7:
Because this document obsoletes RFC 8736, IANA is asked to change all
registration information that references [RFC8736] to instead
reference [this document].
Should “references [RFC8736] to instead ..” be changed to “references [RFC8736]
to ..”