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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pim-yang-12

Request Review of draft-ietf-pim-yang
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2017-12-22
Requested 2017-12-08
Authors Xufeng Liu , Pete McAllister , Anish Peter , Mahesh Sivakumar , Yisong Liu , fangwei hu
I-D last updated 2018-01-01
Completed reviews Yangdoctors Early review of -00 by Dean Bogdanović (diff)
Yangdoctors Last Call review of -12 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff)
Rtgdir Telechat review of -12 by Adrian Farrel (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -12 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -12 by Roni Even (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -12 by Melinda Shore (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Melinda Shore
State Completed
Review review-ietf-pim-yang-12-secdir-lc-shore-2018-01-01
Reviewed revision 12 (document currently at 17)
Result Ready
Completed 2018-01-01
This document presents a YANG model for devices that implement protocol
independent multicast (PIM).  The bulk of this document contains data model
definitions for the base model and for PIM YANG models and is beyond the scope
of this review.

The security considerations section appears to be derived directly from
published YANG model RFCs and seems reasonable.  The nits checker picked up
some outdated references and two downrefs (Normative reference to an
Informational RFC: RFC 3569 and Normative reference to an Experimental RFC: RFC
3973) as well as several outdated references, and those will need to be fixed
prior to publication.

Overall, the document quality is good.