Last Call Review of draft-ietf-precis-7700bis-07
review-ietf-precis-7700bis-07-genart-lc-housley-2017-05-31-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-precis-7700bis
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2017-06-13
Requested 2017-05-30
Authors Peter Saint-Andre
I-D last updated 2017-10-05 (Latest revision 2017-07-25)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -07 by Russ Housley (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -07 by Nevil Brownlee (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -07 by Daniel Migault (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -08 by Russ Housley (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Russ Housley
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-precis-7700bis by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 07 (document currently at 10)
Result Ready
Completed 2017-05-31
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Document: draft-ietf-precis-7700bis-07
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2017-05-31
IETF LC End Date: 2017-06-13
IESG Telechat date: 2017-07-06

Summary: Ready

Major Concerns: None

Minor Concerns: None

Nits:

Section 2.3 includes this note:

   Note: An entity SHOULD NOT apply the Case Mapping Rule during
   enforcement, because typically it is appropriate only during
   comparison.

I question the inclusion of "typically" in this note.  Can you simply
say that the Case Mapping Rule SHOULD only be used during comparison?