Last Call Review of draft-ietf-precis-7700bis-07
review-ietf-precis-7700bis-07-opsdir-lc-brownlee-2017-06-19-00

Hi all:

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.

In reading this draft, I'm someone with little familiarity with
multi-user chat systems; I found two places where think a little
more explanation would help.  These are:
 1. In section 1.1 the phrase 'kicking users' is unfamiliar.
 2. In section 2 the phrase 'PRECIS FreeformClass' appears.
      Would a reference to [RFC7564] be helpful here?

Otherwise, the changes in this draft are made clear in Appendix Q,
to me they seem sensible.

Overall, apart from my 1. and 2. suggestions above, this draft
is ready for submission to IESG.

Cheers, Nevil

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