Last Call Review of draft-ietf-pwe3-mspw-er-05
review-ietf-pwe3-mspw-er-05-genart-lc-shirazipour-2014-08-22-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-pwe3-mspw-er |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 06) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2014-08-22 | |
| Requested | 2014-08-11 | |
| Authors | Pranjal Dutta , Matthew Bocci , Luca Martini | |
| I-D last updated | 2014-08-22 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -05
by Meral Shirazipour
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -05 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Paul E. Hoffman (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-pwe3-mspw-er by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 05 (document currently at 06) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2014-08-22 |
review-ietf-pwe3-mspw-er-05-genart-lc-shirazipour-2014-08-22-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-pwe3-mspw-er-05 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2014-08-22 IETF LC End Date: 2014-08-22 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standard RFC but I have some comments. Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 6], Section 4.1, typo: "A noted in Section 1"---->"As noted in Section 1" -[Page 6],"but each node MUST attempt to determine a loop-free path", if the only method to detect a loop is http://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6073#section-7.6, then perhaps a reference to this RFC would be useful. -[Page 8], Section 5, typo :"consesus"---->"consensus" Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com