Last Call Review of draft-ietf-quic-datagram-07
review-ietf-quic-datagram-07-opsdir-lc-schoenwaelder-2021-12-13-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-quic-datagram |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 10) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Ops Directorate (opsdir) | |
| Deadline | 2021-12-24 | |
| Requested | 2021-12-10 | |
| Authors | Tommy Pauly , Eric Kinnear , David Schinazi | |
| Draft last updated | 2021-12-13 | |
| Completed reviews |
Secdir Last Call review of -07
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Carl Wallace
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Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff) Genart Last Call review of -08 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) Opsdir Telechat review of -08 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Jürgen Schönwälder |
| State | Completed | |
| Review |
review-ietf-quic-datagram-07-opsdir-lc-schoenwaelder-2021-12-13
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| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/0TAlfm-m3dUmF1-YNTj8ts8JLmQ | |
| Reviewed revision | 07 (document currently at 10) | |
| Result | Ready | |
| Completed | 2021-12-13 |
review-ietf-quic-datagram-07-opsdir-lc-schoenwaelder-2021-12-13-00
This is a very clear and well written document. I believe it is ready to be published. I spotted only one minor editorial issue in the security considerations: [...] connections that use DATAGRAM frames might be distinguished from other frames using the different response to loss. The phrase "connections might be distinguished from other frames" feels a bit odd. How about this instead: [...] connections that use DATAGRAM frames might be distinguished from other connections due to their different response to frame losses. /js