Last Call Review of draft-ietf-quic-datagram-07
review-ietf-quic-datagram-07-opsdir-lc-schoenwaelder-2021-12-13-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-quic-datagram
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 10)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2021-12-24
Requested 2021-12-10
Authors Tommy Pauly , Eric Kinnear , David Schinazi
I-D last updated 2021-12-13
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -07 by Carl Wallace (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -07 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -08 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Opsdir Telechat review of -08 by Jürgen Schönwälder (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Jürgen Schönwälder
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-quic-datagram by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/0TAlfm-m3dUmF1-YNTj8ts8JLmQ
Reviewed revision 07 (document currently at 10)
Result Ready
Completed 2021-12-13
review-ietf-quic-datagram-07-opsdir-lc-schoenwaelder-2021-12-13-00
This is a very clear and well written document. I believe it is ready
to be published. I spotted only one minor editorial issue in the
security considerations:

   [...] connections that use DATAGRAM frames might be
   distinguished from other frames using the different response
   to loss.

The phrase "connections might be distinguished from other frames"
feels a bit odd. How about this instead:

   [...] connections that use DATAGRAM frames might be
   distinguished from other connections due to their different
   response to frame losses.

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