Last Call Review of draft-ietf-quic-tls-32
review-ietf-quic-tls-32-opsdir-lc-banks-2020-11-16-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-quic-tls
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 34)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2020-11-16
Requested 2020-10-21
Authors Martin Thomson , Sean Turner
I-D last updated 2020-11-16
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -32 by Radia Perlman (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -32 by Gyan Mishra (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -32 by Sarah Banks (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Sarah Banks
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-quic-tls by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/otT16vQ2a73cL0nUGxPagTpGc_w
Reviewed revision 32 (document currently at 34)
Result Ready
Completed 2020-11-16
review-ietf-quic-tls-32-opsdir-lc-banks-2020-11-16-00
Hi,
    I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's
    ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. 
    These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational
    aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call
    may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and
    WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call
    comments.

Status: Ready for publication

     Overall, I found this to be a very well written document. For a doc that
     tracks at ~65 pages, I couldn't find any critiques, short of editorial
     nits here and there. It reads as "thoughtful", and as if it's had the many
     reviews and eyeballs on it as it seems to have had. I also appreciated the
     feedback and advice regarding performance. A big thank you to the authors,
     the WG, and the reviewers who pitched in; your effort shows.

Thanks
Sarah