Telechat Review of draft-ietf-quic-transport-33
review-ietf-quic-transport-33-genart-telechat-bryant-2021-01-04-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-quic-transport
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 34)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2021-01-05
Requested 2020-12-14
Authors Jana Iyengar , Martin Thomson
I-D last updated 2021-01-04
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -32 by Ron Bonica (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -32 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -33 by Bernie Volz (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -33 by Stewart Bryant (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Stewart Bryant
State Completed
Review review-ietf-quic-transport-33-genart-telechat-bryant-2021-01-04
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/kIZBTGpYJCStzG4cSBuSN-KbSrM
Reviewed revision 33 (document currently at 34)
Result Ready
Completed 2021-01-04
review-ietf-quic-transport-33-genart-telechat-bryant-2021-01-04-00
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Document: draft-ietf-quic-transport-33
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2021-01-04
IETF LC End Date: 2020-11-16
IESG Telechat date: 2021-01-07

Summary:
This is a very clever, well written and innovative body of work, and is ready
to be published.

Given the huge number of people that will need to be conversant with this, I
think it would be useful if a document akin to a tutorial were published by the
WG to help those with less specialist interest better understand the principles
of operation. Normally such material would be included in the base text, but I
understand the concern that this already a large document.

Major issues:

None

Minor issues:

None

Nits/editorial comments:

None