Telechat Review of draft-ietf-radext-radius-extensions-11
review-ietf-radext-radius-extensions-11-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2013-03-08-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-radext-radius-extensions |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 13) | |
| Type | Telechat Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2013-01-25 | |
| Requested | 2013-01-17 | |
| Authors | Alan DeKok , Avi Lior | |
| I-D last updated | 2013-03-08 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -08
by Meral Shirazipour
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Meral Shirazipour (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Meral Shirazipour |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Telechat review on draft-ietf-radext-radius-extensions by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
| Reviewed revision | 11 (document currently at 13) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2013-03-08 |
review-ietf-radext-radius-extensions-11-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2013-03-08-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> . Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-radext-radius-extensions-12 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2013-02-18 IETF LC End Date: 2013-01-25 IESG Telechat date: 2013-02-21 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Proposed Standard (with some editorial comments). Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 15], 3rd paragraph, "withing"--typo-->"within" -[Page 27], Figure at the bottom is cut. -[Page 32], Figure at the bottom is cut. -[Page 37], Section 5.2, "implementors"—typo?-->" implementers " Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com