Telechat Review of draft-ietf-radext-radius-extensions-11

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Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-01-25
Requested 2013-01-17
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Review completed: 2013-03-08


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Document: draft-ietf-radext-radius-extensions-12

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour

Review Date: 2013-02-18

IETF LC End Date: 2013-01-25

IESG Telechat date: 2013-02-21


Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Proposed Standard (with some editorial comments).



Nits/editorial comments:

-[Page 15], 3rd paragraph, "withing"--typo-->"within"

-[Page 27], Figure at the bottom is cut.

-[Page 32], Figure at the bottom is cut.

-[Page 37], Section 5.2, "implementors"—typo?-->"





Best Regards,



Meral Shirazipour