Telechat Review of draft-ietf-radext-radius-extensions-11
review-ietf-radext-radius-extensions-11-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2013-03-08-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-radext-radius-extensions
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 13)
Type Telechat Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2013-01-25
Requested 2013-01-17
Other Reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Meral Shirazipour (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Meral Shirazipour
Review review-ietf-radext-radius-extensions-11-genart-telechat-shirazipour-2013-03-08
Posted at http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg08206.html
Reviewed rev. 11 (document currently at 13)
Review result Ready with Nits
Draft last updated 2013-03-08
Review completed: 2013-03-08

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Document: draft-ietf-radext-radius-extensions-12




Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour




Review Date: 2013-02-18




IETF LC End Date: 2013-01-25




IESG Telechat date: 2013-02-21




 




Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Proposed Standard (with some editorial comments).




 




 




Nits/editorial comments:




-[Page 15], 3rd paragraph, "withing"--typo-->"within"




-[Page 27], Figure at the bottom is cut.




-[Page 32], Figure at the bottom is cut.




-[Page 37], Section 5.2, "implementors"—typo?-->"

implementers

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Meral




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