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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-rats-eat-21
review-ietf-rats-eat-21-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2023-08-09-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-rats-eat
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 31)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2023-08-09
Requested 2023-07-19
Authors Laurence Lundblade , Giridhar Mandyam , Jeremy O'Donoghue , Carl Wallace
I-D last updated 2023-08-09
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -21 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -27 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -21 by Ines Robles (diff)
Intdir Telechat review of -21 by Haoyu Song (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -13 by Hilarie Orman (diff)
Iotdir Last Call review of -13 by Eliot Lear (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-rats-eat by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/JFlni8Ae0gordzC1AxZlOPx8rhc
Reviewed revision 21 (document currently at 31)
Result Has issues
Completed 2023-08-09
review-ietf-rats-eat-21-opsdir-lc-dunbar-2023-08-09-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the Ops area directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Ops area directors.
Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other
last-call comments.

Summary: the document illustrates using the CBOR Web Token (CWT) or JSON Web
Token (JWT) as the Entity Attestation Token for various entities, such as
devices, hardware components, software modules, etc.

One issue I don't see is how to extend to the entities that are not illustrated
in the document? Like future "Foo" with a expiration date? Does it mean that
IANA needs to keep track of all those entity names? Is it really necessary?
Many entities are only valid in a special deployment environment. As long as
both parties agree upon the JSON format, why need to bother IANA?

Thank you very much,

Linda Dunbar