Last Call Review of draft-ietf-rats-eat-media-type-10
review-ietf-rats-eat-media-type-10-iotdir-lc-korhonen-2024-10-09-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-rats-eat-media-type |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 12) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | Internet of Things Directorate (iotdir) | |
| Deadline | 2024-10-10 | |
| Requested | 2024-09-26 | |
| Requested by | Deb Cooley | |
| Authors | Laurence Lundblade , Henk Birkholz , Thomas Fossati | |
| I-D last updated | 2024-10-09 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -10
by Christer Holmberg
(diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -10 by Tim Hollebeek (diff) Artart Last Call review of -11 by Yoshiro Yoneya (diff) Iotdir Last Call review of -10 by Jouni Korhonen (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Jouni Korhonen |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-rats-eat-media-type by Internet of Things Directorate Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/iot-directorate/sETfduR3DkccnO3fyPG1MUuy3Ow | |
| Reviewed revision | 10 (document currently at 12) | |
| Result | Ready w/nits | |
| Completed | 2024-10-09 |
review-ietf-rats-eat-media-type-10-iotdir-lc-korhonen-2024-10-09-00
Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen Review result: Ready with Nits I have done the iotdir Last Call Review for the draft-ietf-rats-eat-media-type-10. Content wise the draft look fine to me. There are few nits that need attention, though. 1) [CoAP] is in Normative references but never used. 2) RFC 7159 has been Obsoleted by RFC 8259. 3) Figure 1 has 'RP', which I assume refers to Relying Party. Consider expansing the acronym.