Telechat Review of draft-ietf-raw-architecture-25
review-ietf-raw-architecture-25-iotdir-telechat-thaler-2025-07-02-00

I am the assigned IOTDIR reviewer for this document.

I found the document to be easily readable and well-written, modulo a
bunch of typos and grammatical nits.  A marked up copy with all
of my comments/suggestions to fix editorial nits is at:

https://1drv.ms/b/c/dc2b364f3f06fea8/EX2CTd0YGM9FkbK2YqL-oyAB56Tn91O4M2eqkq_63OsqNA?e=pmZlen

I only had 1 technical comment on the document, which is in the
security considerations section.  Section 6.2 (Forced Access) only
discusses financial cost as a metric that can be attacked.  However,
I believe that forced access can similarly be used to attack other
metrics such as battery life of IOT nodes, or causing congestion on the
forced path, thus reducing throughput, etc.  I believe these should
be similarly called out in that section before publication.

Dave