Last Call Review of draft-ietf-regext-allocation-token-09
review-ietf-regext-allocation-token-09-genart-lc-yee-2018-08-05-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-regext-allocation-token
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2018-08-03
Requested 2018-07-14
Authors James Gould , Kal Feher
I-D last updated 2018-08-05
Completed reviews Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Al Morton (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by David Mandelberg (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -09 by Peter E. Yee (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Peter E. Yee
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-regext-allocation-token by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Reviewed revision 09 (document currently at 12)
Result Ready w/nits
Completed 2018-08-05
review-ietf-regext-allocation-token-09-genart-lc-yee-2018-08-05-00
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Document: draft-ietf-regext-allocation-token-09
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: 2018-08-05
IETF LC End Date: 2018-08-03
IESG Telechat date: 2018-08-16

Summary: The draft is ready with a nit and a question.

Major issues: N/A

Minor issues:

Page 6, 1st line: how is the client expected to differentiate between the two
reasons behind this response, so that it can remedy the problem?  [I'm not sure
this is considered much of a problem, so ignore this question if the handing is
well understood in the community.]

Nits/editorial comments:

Page 9, 1st partial paragraph, 2nd line: change "auhorization" to
"authorization".