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Telechat Review of draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-11

Request Review of draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Telechat Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2019-10-15
Requested 2019-10-07
Authors Ning Kong , Jiankang Yao , Linlin Zhou , Wil Tan , Jiagui Xie
I-D last updated 2019-10-10
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -09 by Russ Housley (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -09 by Joel M. Halpern (diff)
Secdir Telechat review of -11 by Russ Housley
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Joel M. Halpern
Assignment Reviewer Russ Housley
State Completed
Request Telechat review on draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Posted at
Reviewed revision 11
Result Has issues
Completed 2019-10-10
I reviewed this document as part of the Security Directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Security Area
Directors.  Document authors, document editors, and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other IETF Last Call comments.

Document: draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-11
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2019-10-10
IETF LC End Date: 2019-03-15
IESG Telechat date: 2019-10-17

Summary: Has Issues

Major Concerns:

The Abstract ans Section 1 say: "This is a non-standard proprietary
extension." I understand that this is not a standards track document, so
the "non-standard" part makes sense.  However, what is the point of
publishing a "proprietary" extension as an RFC.  I would hope that
interoperable implementations is the goal of publication.

In Section 1, the use of "policy-wise" is unclear.  Is this registration
policy or something else?

Minor Concerns:



Section 1: s/label(LABEL)/label (LABEL)/
- s/(V-tld);/(V-tld)./

In addition, there are several places in the upper left corner of the
title page:
   Internet        Engineering     Task Force