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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-regext-epp-delete-bcp-08
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Request Review of draft-ietf-regext-epp-delete-bcp
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 09)
Type Last Call Review
Team ART Area Review Team (artart)
Deadline 2024-11-28
Requested 2024-11-14
Authors Scott Hollenbeck , William Carroll , Gautam Akiwate
I-D last updated 2024-11-26
Completed reviews Dnsdir Last Call review of -08 by Ralf Weber (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Carl Wallace (diff)
Artart Last Call review of -08 by Jiankang Yao (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -08 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Dnsdir Telechat review of -09 by Ralf Weber
Assignment Reviewer Jiankang Yao
State Completed
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Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 09)
Result Almost ready
Completed 2024-11-26
review-ietf-regext-epp-delete-bcp-08-artart-lc-yao-2024-11-26-00
Reviewer: Jiankang Yao
Review result: Almost Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-regext-epp-delete-bcp-08
Reviewer: Jiankang Yao
Review Date: 2024-11-26

Summary: Almost Ready for publication.

This document describes a very important topic. The whole document is ok.

One suggestion:

Based on the title "Best Practices for Deletion of Domain and Host Objects in
the Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP)", this document is supposed to
outline current best practices and proposes the best approaches for deleting
domain and host objects to minimize the risk of DNS resolution failure and
ensure data consistency between clients and servers. But the main part of this
document is section 5 "Analysis of Practices for Domain and Host Object
Deletion", including many sub-sections "Practice Benefits" and "Practice
Detriments". Only small section 6 "Recommendations" seems to describe the best
practices. This arrangement causes me some confusion.

How about renaming the title to something such as "Analysis and Recommendation
of Practices for Deletion of Domain and Host Objects in the Extensible
Provisioning Protocol (EPP)"? I think that it will help to make the title and
content more cohesive.

Best Regards
Jiankang Yao