Last Call Review of draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-15
review-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-15-opsdir-lc-andersson-2024-08-30-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 16)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2024-08-12
Requested 2024-07-29
Authors Gavin Brown
I-D last updated 2024-08-30
Completed reviews Dnsdir Early review of -09 by Anthony Somerset (diff)
Dnsdir Last Call review of -15 by Tim Wicinski (diff)
Artart Last Call review of -15 by Takahiro Nemoto (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -15 by Ines Robles (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -15 by Wes Hardaker (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -15 by Per Andersson (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Per Andersson
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl by Ops Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/ops-dir/sALkuR98CS1pV2eASHl34qVZG5g
Reviewed revision 15 (document currently at 16)
Result Ready
Completed 2024-08-30
review-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-15-opsdir-lc-andersson-2024-08-30-00
Reviewer: Per Andersson
Review Result: Ready

This is my review of OPSDIR draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-15.

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational
aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call
may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors
and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call
comments.


Summary:

This document describes an extension to the Extensible Provisioning
Protocol (EPP) that allows EPP clients to manage the Time-To-Live
(TTL) value for domain name delegation records.


Issues:

None


Nits:

The following nits are present.

  ** Downref: Normative reference to an Informational RFC: RFC 7451

  -- Possible downref: Non-RFC (?) normative reference: ref. 'XSD-DATATYPES'

The Downref error seems to be fixed in the git repository for the
document. Please publish this change.


Than you for a well written document!


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Per