Last Call Review of draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-17
review-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-17-dnsdir-lc-somerset-2024-11-11-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 18)
Type Last Call Review
Team DNS Directorate (dnsdir)
Deadline 2024-11-18
Requested 2024-11-04
Authors Gavin Brown
I-D last updated 2024-11-11
Completed reviews Dnsdir Early review of -09 by Anthony Somerset (diff)
Dnsdir Last Call review of -15 by Tim Wicinski (diff)
Artart Last Call review of -15 by Takahiro Nemoto (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -15 by Ines Robles (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -15 by Wes Hardaker (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -15 by Per Andersson (diff)
Dnsdir Last Call review of -17 by Anthony Somerset (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -17 by Wes Hardaker (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Anthony Somerset
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl by DNS Directorate Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/dnsdir/twoA13ECSY0QCuJU6mQGeSXtZmo
Reviewed revision 17 (document currently at 18)
Result Ready
Completed 2024-11-11
review-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-17-dnsdir-lc-somerset-2024-11-11-00
Hi,

I have been selected as the DNS Directorate reviewer for this draft. The
DNS Directorate seeks to review all DNS or DNS-related drafts as
they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special
request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the ADs.
For more information about the DNS Directorate, please see
https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/dnsdir

I previously reviewed version 09 of this draft and at that time stated that
it was "Ready with Nits" This review focuses on changes since that version
as well as my original review commentary.

I believe this document now has the status: Ready

My Nits and clarifications have been addressed in full and all the other 
changes made between versions 09 and 17 do not give me new reasons to nit
pick and otherwise provide greater clarity on an already well written document

Thanks for your hard work on this draft

Best Regards

Anthony