Last Call Review of draft-ietf-regext-rdap-partial-response-12

Request Review of draft-ietf-regext-rdap-partial-response
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 16)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2020-08-14
Requested 2020-07-24
Authors Mario Loffredo, Maurizio Martinelli
Draft last updated 2020-07-24
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -12 by David Schinazi (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -13 by Joel Jaeggli (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -13 by Joseph Salowey (diff)
Assignment Reviewer David Schinazi 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-regext-rdap-partial-response-12-genart-lc-schinazi-2020-07-24
Posted at
Reviewed rev. 12 (document currently at 16)
Review result Ready with Issues
Review completed: 2020-07-24


I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

For more information, please see the FAQ at

Document: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-partial-response-12
Reviewer: David Schinazi
Review Date: 2020-07-24
IETF LC End Date: 2020-08-14
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Document is clear, well-written, and short. Thank you!

Major issues: None

Minor issues: After reading the document, I was somewhat
confused as to the definition of fieldSet query parameter.
I think adding a few sentences to Section 2 explaining that
a field set is a string that the server generates which maps 
to a set of fields only known to the server would help.
Additionally, specifying that the string can't be empty and
which characters are allowed might help avoid interop
issues down the road.

Nits/editorial comments: None