IETF Last Call Review of draft-ietf-regext-rdap-ttl-extension-08
review-ietf-regext-rdap-ttl-extension-08-genart-lc-gurbani-2026-04-30-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-regext-rdap-ttl-extension
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2026-05-13
Requested 2026-04-29
Authors Gavin Brown
I-D last updated 2026-08-13 (Latest revision 2026-05-27)
Completed reviews Dnsdir Early review of -08 by Di Ma (diff)
Opsdir Early review of -08 by Nabeel Cocker (diff)
Genart IETF Last Call review of -08 by Vijay K. Gurbani (diff)
Dnsdir Telechat review of -10 by Ralf Weber (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Vijay K. Gurbani
State Completed
Request IETF Last Call review on draft-ietf-regext-rdap-ttl-extension by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/g4Q8M1HJMuMB90iUY-xDDHMP8TQ
Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 12)
Result Ready
Completed 2026-04-30
review-ietf-regext-rdap-ttl-extension-08-genart-lc-gurbani-2026-04-30-00
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Document: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-ttl-extension-??
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 2026-04-30
IETF LC End Date: 2026-05-13
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This I-D is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.

Major issues: 0

Minor issues: 0

Nits/editorial comments: 1

Nits:
1. Introduction: too many commas in "Inclusion of these values in RDAP
responses, in addition to nameservers, glue IP addresses, and DS records,
allows out-of-band debugging of the DNS configuration oftroublesome domain
names.". Perhaps this rewrite suffices: "Inclusion of these values in RDAP
responses --- in addition to nameservers, glue IP addresses, and DS records ---
allows out-of-band debugging of the DNS configuration of troublesome domain
names."

Thanks,

- vijay