Last Call Review of draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-02
review-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-02-genart-lc-romascanu-2021-02-04-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 03)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2021-02-08
Requested 2021-01-25
Authors Scott Hollenbeck, Andrew Newton
Draft last updated 2021-02-04
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -02 by Dan Romascanu (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -02 by Stefan Santesson (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Dan Romascanu 
State Completed
Review review-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-02-genart-lc-romascanu-2021-02-04
Posted at https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/kLHAKO-oiZOvfyVUcS_iSIp3RLY
Reviewed rev. 02 (document currently at 03)
Review result Ready with Issues
Review completed: 2021-02-04

Review
review-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-02-genart-lc-romascanu-2021-02-04

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Document: draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-02
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review Date: 2021-02-04
IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-08
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

This Document is Ready with one issue that I would suggest to clarify and possibly apply edits before approval. 

Major issues:

If my understanding is correct this document together with 7483bis will replace RFC 7482 and RFC 7483 and advance them to Internet Standard. Sections 7 and 8 will be taken out from the final published RFC. I believe that the relationship with RFC 7482 needs to be detailed either in the Introduction or in a dedicated version, in order to clarify for future readers and users the status of the 2 / 4 documents. I also believe that a shortened version of the 'Changes from RFC 7482' section now an Appendix should be included in the text of the document in its final form. 

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: