Last Call Review of draft-ietf-rift-yang-14
review-ietf-rift-yang-14-genart-lc-dunbar-2024-06-24-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-rift-yang
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 17)
Type IETF Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2024-06-21
Requested 2024-06-07
Authors Zheng Zhang , Yuehua Wei , Shaowen Ma , Xufeng Liu , Bruno Rijsman
I-D last updated 2025-04-04 (Latest revision 2024-08-17)
Completed reviews Genart IETF Last Call review of -14 by Linda Dunbar (diff)
Yangdoctors IETF Last Call review of -11 by Michal Vaško (diff)
Opsdir IETF Last Call review of -15 by Tim Chown (diff)
Secdir IETF Last Call review of -15 by Daniel Migault (diff)
Rtgdir IETF Last Call review of -13 by Shuping Peng (diff)
Yangdoctors IETF Last Call review of -03 by Michal Vaško (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Linda Dunbar
State Completed
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Reviewed revision 14 (document currently at 17)
Result Not ready
Completed 2024-06-24
review-ietf-rift-yang-14-genart-lc-dunbar-2024-06-24-00
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Document: draft-ietf-rift-yang-14

Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2024-06-24
IETF LC End Date: 2024-06-21
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This document defines the YANG data model for RIFT

issues:
- The definition of "PoD" in the document differs from its common usage in the
industry. Typically, a PoD represents a self-contained, modular unit that
includes all necessary components such as compute, storage, and networking
resources.

- The document has two sections labeled "Terminology" (Sections 1.1 and 1.3).
Consolidating these into a single section would improve clarity and reduce
redundancy.

- Need to add references to Clos, ThreeWay Adjacencies,  and Fat Trees.

Thanks, Linda Dunbar