Last Call Review of draft-ietf-rmcat-cc-requirements-05
review-ietf-rmcat-cc-requirements-05-genart-lc-melnikov-2014-08-03-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-rmcat-cc-requirements |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 09) | |
Type | Last Call Review | |
Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
Deadline | 2014-08-13 | |
Requested | 2014-07-31 | |
Authors | Randell Jesup , Zaheduzzaman Sarker | |
I-D last updated | 2014-08-03 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -05
by Alexey Melnikov
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Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Steve Hanna (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -05 by Fred Baker (diff) Opsdir Telechat review of -06 by Fred Baker (diff) Opsdir Telechat review of -07 by Fred Baker (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Alexey Melnikov |
State | Completed | |
Request | Last Call review on draft-ietf-rmcat-cc-requirements by General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 05 (document currently at 09) | |
Result | Ready w/issues | |
Completed | 2014-08-03 |
review-ietf-rmcat-cc-requirements-05-genart-lc-melnikov-2014-08-03-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-rmcat-cc-requirements-05 Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov Review Date: 3-Aug-2014 IETF LC End Date: 13-Aug-2014 IESG Telechat date: N/A Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC [ready with comments] Major issues: None Minor issues: In Section 1: RMCAT is not explained/expanded, when mentioned for the first time. Does this acronym need to be in the published RFC, e.g. would it be useful for readers reading this document 10 years later? RTP and RTCP need references. In general, I found this document not to be very friendly to people who don't follow RMCAT. Nits/editorial comments: None