Telechat Review of draft-ietf-roll-minrank-hysteresis-of-
review-ietf-roll-minrank-hysteresis-of-genart-telechat-garcia-2012-05-07-00

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Document: draft-ietf-roll-minrank-hysteresis-of-10.txt
Reviewer: Miguel Garcia <Miguel.A.Garcia at ericsson.com>
Review Date: 2012-05-08
IESG Telechat date: 2012-05-10

Summary: The document is ready for publication as a standards track RFC

Major issues: none

Minor issues: none

Nits/editorial comments:



I reviewed version -07 of this document. At that time, I had a few 


editorial comments, and all of them but one have been addressed in 


version -10. The comment that has not been address is included here again 


for your consideration:




- Section 3.1. Towards the end of the section, the sentence reads:

   The path cost corresponding to a neighbor SHOULD be re-computed each
   time:



and then there are 3 conditions numbered from 1 to 3. It is not clear if 


the path cost should be recomputed when all of the 3 conditions are met, 


or when any of the 3 conditions are met. In other words, it is not clear 


if the 3 bullet points are an "AND" or an "OR" operation among then. 


Presumably they are an "OR". If this is the case, perhaps the sentence 


should be rephrased as:




   The path cost corresponding to a neighbor SHOULD be re-computed each
   time any of the following conditions are met:



/Miguel
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Miguel A. Garcia
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