Last Call Review of draft-ietf-roll-rpl-
review-ietf-roll-rpl-secdir-lc-tsou-2010-09-02-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-roll-rpl
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 19)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2010-09-13
Requested 2010-08-20
Authors Roger Alexander , Anders Brandt , JP Vasseur , Jonathan Hui , Kris Pister , Pascal Thubert , P Levis , Rene Struik , Richard Kelsey , Tim Winter
I-D last updated 2010-09-02
Completed reviews Secdir Last Call review of -?? by Tina Tsou (Ting ZOU)
Assignment Reviewer Tina Tsou (Ting ZOU)
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-roll-rpl by Security Area Directorate Assigned
Completed 2010-09-02
review-ietf-roll-rpl-secdir-lc-tsou-2010-09-02-00
I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's 


ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.



These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security
area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
comments just like any other last call comments.

This draft is well written. I only have two comments.

1. It is lack of manageability aspects to produce MIB;
2. Should be added flow examples for RPL;



B. R.
Tina


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