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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-roll-trickle-mcast-07

Request Review of draft-ietf-roll-trickle-mcast
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 12)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2014-02-07
Requested 2014-01-31
Authors Jonathan Hui , Richard Kelsey
I-D last updated 2014-02-24
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -05 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Genart Last Call review of -07 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Christer Holmberg (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -05 by Tero Kivinen (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -09 by Benoît Claise (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Christer Holmberg
State Completed
Review review-ietf-roll-trickle-mcast-07-genart-lc-holmberg-2014-02-24
Reviewed revision 07 (document currently at 12)
Result Ready with Nits
Completed 2014-02-24

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Document:                         draft-ietf-roll-trickle-mcast-07

Reviewer:                           Christer Holmberg

Review Date:                     24 February 2014

IETF LC End Date:             7 February 2014

IETF Telechat Date:         N/A

Summary:        I provided comments on a previous version (-05) of this
document. Unfortunately I can’t find the reply to my comments from the authors,
 so some of my comments may not have been valid, or the authors may have
 disagreed with my change suggestions.

However, when I check the -07 version of the document I see that some of my
comments have not been addressed, so I’ll re-submit them again - just
 in case.

Major Issues: None

Minor Issues: None

Editorial nits:

Section 1:



I assume "LLN" stands for "Low power and Lossy Networks", but there is no
extension anywhere. Please insert "Low power and Lossy Networks (LLN)" on
 first occurance.

Section 3:



In a few places the text says "this protocol". I would suggest to replace that
with "MPL".

Section 4:



I would suggest to add something in front of "Overview" in the subject of
section 4.3. Overview of what? :)