Last Call Review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-audio-10
review-ietf-rtcweb-audio-10-secdir-lc-roca-2016-03-10-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-audio
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team Security Area Directorate (secdir)
Deadline 2016-03-09
Requested 2016-02-25
Other Reviews Genart Last Call review of -10 by Ron Bonica (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -10 by Fred Baker (diff)
Review State Completed
Reviewer Vincent Roca
Review review-ietf-rtcweb-audio-10-secdir-lc-roca-2016-03-10
Posted at https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/secdir/current/msg06406.html
Reviewed rev. 10 (document currently at 11)
Review result Ready
Draft last updated 2016-03-10
Review completed: 2016-03-10

Review
review-ietf-rtcweb-audio-10-secdir-lc-roca-2016-03-10

Hello,

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's

ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the

IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the

security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat

these comments just like any other last call comments.

Summary:

 ready

This is a small document with many references to external 

documents and

their related security sections. It seems appropriate to me.

Typo:

 

please remove the additional "security" in the following sentence:

Likewise, consult the RTP base specification for 

security 

RTP-based 

security

 considerations.

Cheers,

  Vincent