Early Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-bgp-routing-large-dc-05
review-ietf-rtgwg-bgp-routing-large-dc-05-rtgdir-early-hares-2015-07-23-00
Request | Review of | draft-ietf-rtgwg-bgp-routing-large-dc |
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Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 11) | |
Type | Early Review | |
Team | Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir) | |
Deadline | 2015-08-25 | |
Requested | 2015-05-26 | |
Authors | Petr Lapukhov , Ariff Premji , Jon Mitchell | |
I-D last updated | 2015-07-23 | |
Completed reviews |
Genart Telechat review of -10
by Dan Romascanu
(diff)
Genart Telechat review of -11 by Dan Romascanu Secdir Telechat review of -09 by Yoav Nir (diff) Secdir Telechat review of -11 by Yoav Nir Opsdir Telechat review of -09 by Lionel Morand (diff) Rtgdir Early review of -01 by Danny R. McPherson (diff) Rtgdir Early review of -05 by Susan Hares (diff) Rtgdir Early review of -09 by Acee Lindem (diff) |
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Assignment | Reviewer | Susan Hares |
State | Completed | |
Request | Early review on draft-ietf-rtgwg-bgp-routing-large-dc by Routing Area Directorate Assigned | |
Reviewed revision | 05 (document currently at 11) | |
Result | Has issues | |
Completed | 2015-07-23 |
review-ietf-rtgwg-bgp-routing-large-dc-05-rtgdir-early-hares-2015-07-23-00
Jeff, Chris, Petr, Ariff, and Jon: This is a second routing directorate review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-bgp-routing-large-dc-05. The rtgwg chairs asked me to provide my insights as a BGP person for many years. Status: Publish after correcting a few BGP issues · Great leaps forward from the Original document, and an interested document to read. · A few minor technical issues, Editorial issues: As the second reviewer, I did not focus on the editorial nits and errors. The English could still be improved in many sections. If the chairs wish me to pull out my scholarly red pen, I will do so. Minor technical issues: 1) P. 5 – ANYCAST and ECMP have been a fine idea for 8-10 years. 2) P. 10 – Your TRILL comments could use a bit more clarity. Here’s the facts 2-a) TRILL (Huawei) and “early TRILL” (Cisco, Brocade) – have been deployed in the Layers 2 design. TRILL requires special forwarding (due to header), but there is a draft to use TRILL over IP ( http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-trill-over-ip/) . The TRILL forwarding has had active-active added to its capability which deal with the broadcast/undefined multicast (BUM traffic). TRILL deployment make use of the proprietary directory services in order to reduce the BUM traffic or the IP/MAC look up traffic. Five new drafts are heading toward the IESG that allow a standardized directory service (2 provide over-all designs for service, and 3 provide additions to standard trill). TRILL shares its OAM with the 802.1ag OAM so that the fault-management and performance management can utilize the automatic features design by 802.1. The draft-ietf-trill-irb-06 solution may help your L2/L3 Design by providing a clear TRILL/Layer-3 gateway. 3) Section 5.1 page 12 a. “BGP deployment within an Autonomous system typically assumes the presence of an IGP for next-hop resolution” Here – BGP can run without an IGP by using the features of ARP/RARP and ND. This feature has been true of BGP since 1987. 4) P.AGE 13 “This meets REQ 3 and REQ 4. It is worth mentioning” I suspect you mean “This use of E-BGP meets REQ3 and REQ4.” However, I could not tell and that’s important for the technology. 5) You should cross reference AS-Migration and other drafts that have “Remove-PRIVATE-AS” before sending out. 6) Multipath-relax should be described in specific detail in a different document if you think is very useful (p. 20) 7) Section 7.1 IDR drafts: draft-ietf-idr-rs-bfd-01 , and draft-jdurand-auto-bfd-00 are proposing BFD/BGP interactions for Route-servers. You should review this documents and link to these documents in your draft. 8) Section 7.2 – You mention Add Paths in many section, but a lot of your problems might be solved with Add-Paths and a guideline on how to reduce the FIB. One way to also aid Add-Paths is to allow for custom cost community to be added at certain points. You do not consider this option. Sue Hares