Early Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-dst-src-routing-revive-04
review-ietf-rtgwg-dst-src-routing-revive-04-secdir-early-mccall-2025-09-17-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-rtgwg-dst-src-routing-revive |
|---|---|---|
| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 04) | |
| Type | Early Review | |
| Team | Security Area Directorate (secdir) | |
| Deadline | 2025-09-19 | |
| Requested | 2025-09-04 | |
| Requested by | Yingzhen Qu | |
| Authors | David 'equinox' Lamparter , Anton Smirnov , Jen Linkova , Shu Yang , Mingwei Xu | |
| I-D last updated | 2025-09-14 (Latest revision 2025-09-14) | |
| Completed reviews |
Opsdir Early review of -04
by Linda Dunbar
Secdir Early review of -04 by Jacqueline McCall Intdir Early review of -04 by Bob Hinden Rtgdir Early review of -04 by Mach Chen |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Jacqueline McCall |
| State | Completed | |
| Request | Early review on draft-ietf-rtgwg-dst-src-routing-revive by Security Area Directorate Assigned | |
| Posted at | https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/secdir/i-W1byzaiLz_Xav1O4g0gLRh2p8 | |
| Reviewed revision | 04 | |
| Result | Has nits | |
| Completed | 2025-09-17 |
review-ietf-rtgwg-dst-src-routing-revive-04-secdir-early-mccall-2025-09-17-00
Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-dst-src-routing-revive-04 Title: Destination/Source Routing Reviewer: Jacqueline McCall Review result: Has nits I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. The summary of the review is “Ready with nits”. Overall, I think it’s a well-structured document with clear use cases and implementation guidance. Two areas identified for further review are: • Normative references: Sections 5.5 and 5.6 use MUST/RECOMMENDED language tied to RFC 6724 and RFC 8028. These should probably be promoted to normative references. • Editorial: o Multiple spelling errors have been identified eg. “redundandy” → redundancy, “transfering” → transferring, “neccessary” → necessary, etc. o There are some inconsistencies switching between different global spellings for the words "behavior" and "behaviour" and inconsistent switching between "nexthop" and "next-hop".