Last Call Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-lfa-manageability-08
review-ietf-rtgwg-lfa-manageability-08-genart-lc-melnikov-2015-06-25-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-lfa-manageability
Requested rev. no specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart)
Deadline 2015-06-18
Requested 2015-06-11
Authors Pushpasis Sarkar, Stephane Litkowski, Bruno Decraene, Clarence Filsfils, Kamran Raza, Martin Horneffer
Draft last updated 2015-06-25
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Alexey Melnikov (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Magnus Nystrom (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Ron Bonica (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -07 by Hannes Gredler (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Alexey Melnikov
State Completed
Review review-ietf-rtgwg-lfa-manageability-08-genart-lc-melnikov-2015-06-25
Reviewed rev. 08 (document currently at 11)
Review result Ready with Nits
Review completed: 2015-06-25

Review
review-ietf-rtgwg-lfa-manageability-08-genart-lc-melnikov-2015-06-25

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Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-lfa-manageability-08.txt
Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
Review Date: 2015-06-25
IETF LC End Date: 2015-06-18
IESG Telechat date: 2015-06-25

Summary: Ready with nits.

Major issues:  None

Minor issues:



In Section 3.3 - did you mean R5 when talking about P5? I've searched 


multiple times and couldn't find it on the picture.




In 6.2.1:




When selecting the best alternate, the selection algorithm MUST
consider all available alternates (connected or tunnel).  Especially,
computation of PQ set ([I-D.ietf-rtgwg-remote-lfa]) SHOULD be
performed before best alternate selection.






The SHOULD level requirement makes the reference Normative, while it is 


listed as Informative.