Last Call Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-lfa-manageability-08
review-ietf-rtgwg-lfa-manageability-08-genart-lc-melnikov-2015-06-25-00
| Request | Review of | draft-ietf-rtgwg-lfa-manageability |
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| Requested revision | No specific revision (document currently at 11) | |
| Type | Last Call Review | |
| Team | General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) (genart) | |
| Deadline | 2015-06-18 | |
| Requested | 2015-06-11 | |
| Authors | Pushpasis Sarkar , Stephane Litkowski , Bruno Decraene , Clarence Filsfils , Syed Raza , Martin Horneffer | |
| Draft last updated | 2015-06-25 | |
| Completed reviews |
Genart Last Call review of -08
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Alexey Melnikov
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Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Magnus Nystrom (diff) Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Ron Bonica (diff) Rtgdir Early review of -07 by Hannes Gredler (diff) |
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| Assignment | Reviewer | Alexey Melnikov |
| State | Completed Snapshot | |
| Review |
review-ietf-rtgwg-lfa-manageability-08-genart-lc-melnikov-2015-06-25
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| Reviewed revision | 08 (document currently at 11) | |
| Result | Ready with Nits | |
| Completed | 2015-06-25 |
review-ietf-rtgwg-lfa-manageability-08-genart-lc-melnikov-2015-06-25-00
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-lfa-manageability-08.txt Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov Review Date: 2015-06-25 IETF LC End Date: 2015-06-18 IESG Telechat date: 2015-06-25 Summary: Ready with nits. Major issues: None Minor issues: In Section 3.3 - did you mean R5 when talking about P5? I've searched multiple times and couldn't find it on the picture. In 6.2.1: When selecting the best alternate, the selection algorithm MUST consider all available alternates (connected or tunnel). Especially, computation of PQ set ([I-D.ietf-rtgwg-remote-lfa]) SHOULD be performed before best alternate selection. The SHOULD level requirement makes the reference Normative, while it is listed as Informative.