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Last Call Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-lfa-manageability-08
review-ietf-rtgwg-lfa-manageability-08-opsdir-lc-bonica-2015-06-23-00

Request Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-lfa-manageability
Requested revision No specific revision (document currently at 11)
Type Last Call Review
Team Ops Directorate (opsdir)
Deadline 2015-06-18
Requested 2015-06-08
Authors Pushpasis Sarkar , Stephane Litkowski , Bruno Decraene , Clarence Filsfils , Syed Kamran Raza , Martin Horneffer
I-D last updated 2015-06-23
Completed reviews Genart Last Call review of -08 by Alexey Melnikov (diff)
Secdir Last Call review of -08 by Magnus Nyström (diff)
Opsdir Last Call review of -08 by Ron Bonica (diff)
Rtgdir Early review of -07 by Hannes Gredler (diff)
Assignment Reviewer Ron Bonica
State Completed
Request Last Call review on draft-ietf-rtgwg-lfa-manageability by Ops Directorate Assigned
Reviewed revision 08 (document currently at 11)
Result Has nits
Completed 2015-06-23
review-ietf-rtgwg-lfa-manageability-08-opsdir-lc-bonica-2015-06-23-00
Folks,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

This document is on the Standards Track. It provides operational feedback on
LFA, highlights some limitations, and proposes a set of refinements to address
those limitations.  It also proposes required management specifications.

The document is well-written and nearly ready for publication.

Major Issues
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None

Minor Issues
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- Please run this document through the NIT checker and address the NITS

- I am not sure how the sitting IESG feels about the use of lowercase "must",
"should" and "may". You may want to check this before the IESG review.

Ron Bonica